My first reaction is....blah (don't get mad). However, I love your first 2 picks! I don't know if I would have gone back 2 back OF, but that's my own opinion. My gut tells me that you need VMart to move to 1B pick up some decent OBP catcher that will give you some pop and get rid of Ortiz, either trade or pick up somebody worth picking up. There are way better 1B than Ortiz so you HAVE to change that. You could always hold him, and if he does anything trade him.
Your pitching isn't really that great. Sure if you compare it with Yahoo or ESPN's rankings, but it's kind of boring. The good thing is that Webb could bounce back and he has a lot of upside. If I'm you, I'm looking to deal Cain, Hawpe, Ortiz. I'd try to get a 2 for 1 so that you can have some upside in your pitching. Cain will disappoint you, I believe. I'm also iffy about Gallardo because of the HUGE inning jump from last year. That usually means not so good things. I would project with this team you could end up around 5th in your league. I like your OF. You have decent speed, and your power is ok. Hope this helps and Grey doesn't dog me for being wrong.